Requested revision
Standard: | 802.1BA-2011 | Clause: | 7.3.5 |
Clause title: | References to other standards |
Rationale for revision
802.1BA-2011 refers to other standards but does not follow the IEEE SA Standards Style Guide regarding
the dating of specific references. Where there is a reference to a specific clause, the reference must
be dated.
This applies throughout the document, not just to 7.3.5.
Proposed text
In the table in 7.3.5, change the references to dated references. Update the references to current versions,
where applicable (this might be a technical change requiring verification).
Where approved amendments of standards have been incorporated into the base standard, refer to the revised
base standard instead of the amendment: 802.3az is now part of 802.3-2015; 802.11n, 802.11v are
part of 802.11-2012. Update reference to 802.11aa to refer to the approved version, 802.11aa-2012.
Change the ISS reference in the note in clause 5 to be a reference to IEEE Std 802.1AC (no need for a clause
reference).
Other references to specific clauses which need to be dated:
* Clause 5, page 8, referring to Tables 8-1, etc. of 802.1Q
* Clause 5, page 8, referring to 10.2.4.1 of 802.1AS
* Clause 5, page 9, referring to Table 6-6 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.1, page 11, reference to 802.3az should be replaced by Clause 78 of IEEE Std 802.3-2015
* Clause 6.1 (b) (1), page 11, reference to clause 8.6.8 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.2, page 11, reference to 802.1Qbb should be changed to 802.1Q. Also remove "IEEE 802.1Qbb" in bullet b).
* Clause 6.2, page 12, reference to Figure 8-11 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.4, page 12, reference to Clause 35 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.4, page 12, reference to 6.6.4 of 802.1Q, reference to Table 35-6 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.4 (b), page 13, reference to clause 35 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.5, page 14, reference to L.3 of 802.1Q, also 8.6.8.2, Clause 34, and Annex L
* There is a reference to "current 802.11 technologies" which may not be appropriate in a standard.
* Clause 6.5, page 14, reference to 34.6.1 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.5, page 15, reference to L.3 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.5, page 15, reference to "standard IEEE 802.3 framing" quoting incorrect maximum frame size;
same error on page 16 (twice)
* Clause 6.6, page 17, reference to 34.3 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.7.1, page 17, *incorrect* reference to 3.5.1.2 and 3.5.1.3 of 802.1Q, see corrigendum, also in 6.7.2 and 6.7.3
* Clause 6.7.1, page 17, reference in Note to 5.4 of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.7.3, page 18, reference to 11.2.2 and 35.2.2.8.3 b) of 802.1Q
* Clause 6.8, page 18 and 19, multiple references to 802.1Q subclauses: change overall reference to 802.1Q at the top.
* Clause 6.9, page 19, reference to 10.6.2.3 of 802.1AS
Impact on existing networks
There is no impact on existing networks.
Originator
Name: | John Messenger | Email: | JMessenger@advaoptical.com |
Affiliation: | ADVA Optical Networking Ltd | ||
Submitted: | 2016-05-16 |